Love poem... i hate poetry sometimes... but this is just how i feel...do you understand?

Its pretty deep, but its still not getting to the jist of what your trying to prove im still not sure who this person "is" or what she does not enough backround but very deep story. Also it doesnt have to rythm ^^^^ thats just what people like to hear in their heads. Don't feel like you have to use words that don't express how you feel just to make it rythm for others personal enjoyment.